It was a beautiful summer’s morning. Looking out of the window, a radiant pink glow smothered the sky. The clouds were as pure and white as cotton wool and stretched the colours across the heavens.

how could i improve my opening sentence for my coursework? does it sound okay the way it is?

thanks in advance )
i just want to say how the colours of the sky seep through the clouds if u know what i mean!? arrrggghhh i hate bloody english!!